Write Annotated bibliography for an outline

 

1. NAME OF TWO MOVIE INVOLVING PUBLIC SPEAKING IN THE COMMENTS, AND THEN ANSWER 3 TAKE AWAYS, 1 PARAGRAPH PER TAKE AWAY.

Persuasive Speech

2. Write Annotated bibliography base on this outline.

Topic: The Benefits of Volunteering

Audience Analysis: Volunteering strengths your community, so you can help support families, school and support the youth. It is a way to give back and stay connected with one another. Volunteering is helping people in need and being a blessing in someone’s life. Volunteering is giving a helping hand to those who are in need. Today, I challenge you to take a little time out of your busy schedule and make a difference in people’s lives, because you never know what you will get out in return.

Credibility: Personal volunteer experiences:

1. Volunteering at Despensa De La Paz
2. Volunteered at Peace House
3. Volunteered at Hunger Task
4. Volunteered at “Till the Work Is Done” mission in 2015 and 2017 (New Orleans, LA)
5. Volunteering to help Church members with translation
6. Volunteering to teach Sunday school in the summer

 

1. Introduction: With busy lives, it can be hard to find time to volunteer, however, the benefits of volunteering are enormous to you, your family, and your community.
2. Attention Graber: Has anyone ever stopped to help you when you were in need? How did it make you feel?
3. Credibility Statement: If we all did our part to help those in need, our community would be a better and safer place to live. By doing this, we can achieve a greater sense of accomplishment. I try and do many volunteer activities each year and can tell you of the personal benefits from volunteering that I have experienced.
4. Reason to listen: You will see the benefits of volunteering
5. Thesis Statement: Volunteering is beneficial to the giver and to the receiver. It is a way of giving back to your community while developing important social skills, meeting new people, providing career experience, improving health and making a difference in the community and people’s lives.
6. Preview: First, I will talk about five significant benefits of volunteering. Then, I will show you how you can make a difference in some one life by volunteering.

 

1. Body

Transition: Let me begin my first point about the benefits of volunteering.

1. Gain valuable life experience/leadership skills

 

1. You can experience the real world through hands-on work. You will have a chance to learn something different that can be beneficial in your life.
2. Volunteering can help you sharpen your skills and learn new ways of doing things

• It can also help you improve your leadership skills which can help you a long way in your career path

 

Transition: Another benefit of volunteering is that it helps you to connect to others

2. Meet new people/ make friends
   1. Volunteering is a way to be involved and meet people from diverse backgrounds
   2. Volunteering helps connect you to other people by participating in activities

• It helps form special bonds and make community a better place

 

Transition:  One of the most significant benefits of volunteering is advancing your job

3. Provides career experience

 

1. Volunteering also gives you professional experience, so you are able to explore new areas of interests and you can discover hidden talents that may change your view and your self-worth and your future career options.
2. According to the Project Helping Organization research, 56% of new volunteers felt that volunteering would help their career.

• Employers are interested in your extracurricular activities.

1. By volunteering, you can showcase that not only you are committed but, that you’re passionate and it reflects positively in you.

Transition: Volunteering also help you stay healthy

4. Health Benefits

 

1. Overall wellbeing: it helps you stay physically, mentally and emotionally healthy by being engaged in social activities
2. A study found that people who volunteer have an overall lower mortality rate than those who do not volunteer (Corporation for National and Community Service.)

Transition:  After talking about the benefits, I will give you show you how you can make a difference in some one life by volunteering.

5. Make a difference

 

1. You can make a difference in other people’s lives and you feel great and satisfaction for doing something for people.
2. Its positively impact on your community

• Helping others can make a difference in someone’s life and in your own

 

• Conclusion:
  1. Volunteering in your local community will help those around you and help you feel like you have contributed something positive and it is easier than most people think.
  2. There are many benefits that you can find by volunteer opportunity
  3. volunteering meets an important need, takes little time and provides great satisfaction on someone life.
  4. Hope that after my speech, you will have inspiration to volunteer more

Resources:

Dosomething. “11 Facts About Hurricane Katrina.” https://www.dosomething.org/us/facts/11-facts-about-hurricane-katrina , Accessed 2020.

Gabe, E. (n.d.). How Volunteering Gives You An Edge In The Job Market. Retrieved November 11, 2020, from https://blogs.volunteermatch.org/how-volunteering-gives-you-an-edge-in-the-job-market?gclid=CjwKCAiAkan9BRAqEiwAP9X6UWRP0rbeH6ve4c1Y31i4gau1ocV2P3BdP6EVL_iSahyiNKKKE5tjhxoCJjQQAvD_BwE Accessed 2020.

Grimm, Spring & Dietz “The Health Benefits of Volunteering: A Review of Recent Research”

Corporation for National and Community Service. April 2007.

https://www.nationalservice.gov/pdf/07_0506_hbr.pdf . Accessed 2020.

International Services. (n.d.). Retrieved November 11, 2020, from https://www.redcross.org/about-us/our-work/international-services.html. Accessed 2020.

 

ProjectHelping. “Benefits of Volunteering.” https://projecthelping.org/volunteering-benefits/ , Accessed 2020.

These are the comment from teacher; Nice job. Transition missing -1 No counter argument -4 No call to action -4. Tell us something specific to do now. No memorable closing statement (fact/story/quote) Not sure what you did in the bibliography and I do not see an interview. -25. Talk to me if you would like to rework this for a better grade.

 

3. Write Annotated bibliography base on this outline.

 

Topic- The game of soccer

 

Audience analysis; Since soccer the most popular sport in the world, I think I will be able to keep attention of the audience. In order to do that, I will provide the most interesting fact in its history. Also tell an interesting story and maybe call out/ask an individual in the class.

Credibility; I have been playing soccer all my life, sometime as a captain and sometime as a coach for little league. I had played in many teams including school. To do this informative speech, I spent hours just to complete the outline. I have done many researches and learn about this topic about more than 5 hours.

2. Introduction
3. Attention Getter; Has anyone played soccer in here or actually plays soccer?
4. Statement of credibility;

-Assistant coach for a little league of soccer team for local community children (+1 years)

-Captain for community soccer team and for church (+3 years).

-Play for many teams; Mexican, Chin, Burmese, schools, Karen, etc.

1. Reason for audience to listen; Soccer is one of the most popular sports in many countries therefore it is important to be knowledgeable about what soccer really is.
2. Thesis statement; It is important to know the most watched sport history, equipment, and rules to understand what soccer really is.

(Transition- Preview) Everything have a beginning. Let’s start with the history of soccer.

1. Body:
2. Main Idea 1: History of Soccer
3. Supporting material 1: according to athleticscholarship, “more than 2,000 years ago to ancient China. Greece, Rome, and parts of Central America also claim to have started the sport”. The version soccer we know today, and more than 2000 year is different.
4. Supporting material 2: England and Scotland structured version soccer including forbidding tripping opponents and touching the ball with hands.

 

3. Supporting material 3: Before England structure a new version of soccer, the old form of soccer allows people to kick, punch, bit, etc. without any punishment.

 

(Transition): There were no set rules back in the day so the version of soccer that they played was violent. That was until later on that the rules of soccer that we know now come into play.

1. Main Idea 2: The Rules
2. Supporting 1: There are 17 basic rules when it comes to playing soccer. These rules are put in place to make soccer fun, safe, and fair.
3. Supporting 2:

Law 1: Number of Players (up to 11 Players each side, minimum 7)

Law 2: The referee (what he says is law)

Law 3: The duration of the match (45-minute half)

Law 4: Start with Kick off

Law 5: Throw ins (side lines)

Law 6: Goal Kick or Corner Kick (explain where goal kicks and corner kicks are taken)

Law 7: Method of Scoring (when ball crosses line of goal)

Law 8: Fouls (explain what is considered to be fouls)

Law 9: Free kick (where the foul was given)

Law 10: The players equipment (there wearing the right equipment)

(Transition): Soccer is a very physical sport making it very easy for players to get hurt so making sure there wearing the right equipment is very important.

 

1. Main Idea 3: The equipment required
2. Supporting 1: to help to protect your legs it’s required for players to wear shin guards. Shinguards fit on the front of your leg with Velcro straps. Most Shinguards also include a section designed to support your ankle.
3. Supporting 2: To help with safety you’re also required to wear a certain type of cleat. There are many different types of soccer cleats. There’s some that how longer metal studs for softer grass field and shorter plastic studs for harder ground.
4. Supporting 3: Now you’re on a team you will also need to wear black shorts, a jersey, and socks.

 

(Transition to conclusion): Now you see why soccer is a very physical soccer the requires the right equipment to keep you safe.

 

1. Conclusion:
2. Thesis restated: Now you see that having a better understanding of the history of soccer, the rules, and the equipment required to play helps you have a better understanding of why soccer is one of the most watched sports in the world.
3. Review: You can see how the history of soccer is very different than what we know now, how there are a lot of rules that go into play, and the equipment they were when they play.
4. Conclusion: So the next time you watch soccer I hope you can understand more about it.

 

 

Sources:

Hiskey, D. (2013, August 20). The Origin of the Word “Soccer”. Retrieved September 30, 2020, from http://www.todayifoundout.com/index.php/2010/06/the-origin-of-the-word-soccer/

Robinson, J. (n.d.). Soccer 101: Basic Equipment Needed to Play. Retrieved September 30, 2020, from https://www.liveabout.com/soccer-basic-equipment-3557680

What Are The Rules?  The 17 Laws of Soccer Explained – Syosset Soccer Club. (n.d.). Retrieved September 30, 2020, from http://www.syossetsoccer.org/home/683808.html

Sources Explanation

In the first source, it talks about the history of soccer; the origin of soccer, how soccer was invented, which country claims to started soccer, etc. The second source inform and explain the equipment needed in soccer for safety. The last source illustrated the rule/law of soccer. All of the three sources are APA style.