**Keep in mind that the rubric for the rough draft is different from the rubric for the final draft. This one includes

**Keep in mind that the rubric for the rough draft is different from the rubric for the final draft. This one includes a category just for whether or not you met the basic requirements. The final draft rubric won’t include that category, so more points will be about the quality of the content, organization, etc., not just the basic requirements. ;o} Nice work on the rough draft. If you correct the issues below, you’ll have a really strong final draft.You were also required to include two scholarly, academic journal articles from the library databases. Don’t use only web sources. I provided video lessons in announcements on conducting academic research and finding sources in the databases. You can keep all the sources you have; just add two more that are scholarly.Don’t use the word “us” in the thesis because it’s a personal pronoun, and we try to avoid those in formal writing. When you quote word for word, the citation needs to include the page or paragraph number in addition to author and year. Don’t end the first body paragraph with a question. Make it a statement instead. Also remove the question “how?” which you ask a couple of times. Asking questions in writing sounds informal. Remove “you” and “your” from the last body paragraph. These are more personal pronouns, which are informal.Avoid all contractions in formal writing. These are two words joined into one such as don’t, it’s, or I’ll. Instead, write out the full words (ex: do not, it is, I will). Scan for any of them when you finish writing something and make sure to remove any you have. Please take a look at the rubric to see how your grade breaks down.


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