so it doesn’t really need rewritten just grammar etc
I would send teachers feedback along order so writer understands what needs to be corrected
You could say this one sentence
this is the first two sentences in the abstract part.
fifth Sentence needs to be reworded to the words “The team found a lack of communication….
This Section of the paragraph a comment was made Turnover rate is the percentage rate of employees that leave the organization during a certain period.—Try reading your work aloud – it needs transitions. Can you hear how choppy it is?
. Turnover can happen voluntarily, involuntarily, functionally, or dysfunctional. —–It seems like you are spending a lot of time defining turnover. This could be done in a few bullet points.
this is the current feed back
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so the current paper is 10 pages but one page is like the reference one is like the cover sheet etc