Exam 1 – Analysis Response
Criteria Ratings Pts
Introduction

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20 pts
Exceeds Expectations (16-20 pts)
Introduction starts with an adequate topic sentence with the controlling idea that hooks the reader. Introduces the author and title fluidly. Thesis statement is one sentence that is clearly the point that will be proven within the essay. Thoughtful summary/details between the topic sentence and the thesis.
15 pts
Meets Expectations (11-15 pts)
Introduction starts with an adequate topic sentence with the controlling idea. Introduces the author and title. Thesis statement is one sentence with points that will be proven within the essay. Basic summary/details between the topic sentence and the thesis.
10 pts
Needs Improvement (6-10 pts)
Introduction starts with a vague topic sentence with the controlling idea. Author and title mentioned, but not clearly stated. Thesis statement is difficult to follow. Ineffective summary/details between the topic sentence and the thesis.
5 pts
Inadequate (0-5 pts)
There is no apparent organization to the introduction. Missing author and title. Difficult to follow. Absence of clear thesis. Insufficient details.
/ 20 pts
3 Body Paragraphs

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20 pts
Exceeds Expectations (16-20 pts)
All body paragraphs contain a topic, explanation, evidence, analysis, and is related to the thesis. Precise and extensive details given and supported. At least one quotation is cited for each paragraph. Three literary elements are used in analysis.
15 pts
Meets Expectations (11-15 pts)
Most body paragraphs contain a topic, explanation, evidence, analysis, and is related to the thesis. Some details are given and supported. At least two quotations are cited. Two literary elements are used in analysis.
10 pts
Needs Improvement (6-10 pts)
Some body paragraphs contain a topic, explanation, evidence, analysis, and is related to the thesis. Some details given but not supported. At least one quotation is cited. One literary element is used in analysis.
5 pts
Inadequate (0-5 pts)
Less than 3 body paragraphs. Few, if any, body paragraphs contain a topic, explanation, evidence, analysis, and is related to the thesis. No research cited. No literary elements used for analysis.
/ 20 pts
Conclusion

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20 pts
Exceeds Expectations (16-20 pts)
Wraps up the essay by restating the thesis, reviewing the main points briefly, and leaving the reader thinking. The conclusion is creative and/or thoughtful.
15 pts
Meets Expectations (11-15 pts)
Restates the thesis and main points briefly, and leaves the reader with something to think about.
10 pts
Needs Improvement (6-10 pts)
Conclusion restates the thesis, but not the main points.
5 pts
Inadequate (0-5 pts)
Does not restate thesis and main points. Conclusion missing.
/ 20 pts
English Conventions

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20 pts
Exceeds Expectations (16-20 pts)
Sentence structures are complex and vary, subject and verbs agree, varied vocabulary is used, correct punctuation is used. Correct spelling and capitalization.
15 pts
Meets Expectations (11-15 pts)
Uses complex sentences, few errors in verb agreement, punctuation, spelling and capitalization.
10 pts
Needs Improvement (6-10 pts)
Uses compound sentences, many errors in verb agreement, punctuation, spelling and capitalization.
5 pts
Inadequate (0-5 pts)
Uses simple sentences, too many errors in verb agreement, punctuation, spelling and capitalization.
/ 20 pts
MLA Format

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20 pts
Exceeds Expectations (16-20 pts)
Five paragraph essay format is followed precisely and MLA format is smoothly utilized in all areas. Title page, citations, and Works Cited page, margins, font, and line spacing all correctly done.
15 pts
Meets Expectations (11-15 pts)
Five paragraph essay format is generally followed and MLA format is well utilized in most areas. Title page, citations, and Works Cited page, margins, font, and line spacing mostly done.
10 pts
Needs Improvement (6-10 pts)
Essay under five paragraphs, MLA format is inconsistent. Title page, citations, and Works Cited page, margins, font, and line spacing generally done.
5 pts
Inadequate (0-5 pts)
Essay under five paragraphs, MLA format is minimally followed or absent.
/ 20 pts
Total Points: 0
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